I think her hair might be a bit too complex for the style, but the shape is nice. I'd like to see more attention paid to her "resting" line of action aka normal posture. She's coming off awfully young (like 20's-30's) whereas her key words indicate she's significantly older (and she's described as an old lady in the book).
Also, be careful about the shape of her legs/arms. Remember straight vs curved, and don't put too much emphasis on the joint anatomy or you lose the rhythm of the shapes you have going. That second one in from the right is great in the body shape, just maybe a little more playing with posture, silhouette and rhythm! COOL! ^_^
Hey Dave. I'm liking Semile's crazy gypsy woman vibe!
ReplyDeleteI think her hair might be a bit too complex for the style, but the shape is nice. I'd like to see more attention paid to her "resting" line of action aka normal posture. She's coming off awfully young (like 20's-30's) whereas her key words indicate she's significantly older (and she's described as an old lady in the book).
Also, be careful about the shape of her legs/arms. Remember straight vs curved, and don't put too much emphasis on the joint anatomy or you lose the rhythm of the shapes you have going. That second one in from the right is great in the body shape, just maybe a little more playing with posture, silhouette and rhythm! COOL! ^_^