Frustration

Hey guys. I didn't have a ton of time to draw this week- I've been apartment shopping. I know that's not excuse. Anyways, I've been drawing all morning and having very little luck so far. This is what I have right now.

Some shape variations from a fw days ago, looking for was the break the silhouette and expand on the initial idea:

A kind of breakdown of Sal's caravan:

I'm giving the above a complete redo because it's too small AND the wrong shape (too round!). Here's the original for a quick comparison:

 But The details are pretty close to what I want.

See you guys tonight!!